Blog 9 December 24, 2016
This week I have accomplished giving suggestions to my peers on their elevator pitches they have posted on edmodo. I also accomplished giving myself a suggestion on how to improve my pitch incase I come across someone who could benefit me in the project my partner and I are doing. The thing that has gone wrong is I kind of got confused where to tell them their suggestions on how to improve on their pitches, but luckily I remembered Mrs. Miura said to reply on their names or videos. The challenges I have faced are some of my peers own video were pretty good and I did not know how to critique them on it and tell them how they can improve their pitch. Through the process, I have learned what my peers are doing for their 20% projects, who they are trying to help, and what they are trying to achieve. My skills have improved over the week by me critiquing and being helpful (by giving suggestions to help others improve). Yes, we are on track for on-time delivery. No adjustments are needed in our timeline. Our next action is to memorise the pitch and prepare for a live performance.
"How can I improve response"




